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Old 03-26-2010, 06:55 AM   #1
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Default Pata chal jaye ga

us key hansnay us key ronay se pata chal jaye ga
us key bathay bathay khonay se pata chal jaye ga

wo pora hafta roi oar kitna muj ko yad kiya
us key dopatay key konay se pata chal jaye ga

wo kya kya batain karti hai kya kya chupati hai
us key dukh sukh peronay se pata chal jaye ga

main kya batawon mari zindagi main wo kya hai
Mere dil key kisi konay se pata chal jaye ga

mana key usay yad bohat kal be karun ga
per us key har jaga honay se pata chal jaye ga
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Old 03-26-2010, 10:32 AM   #2
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thanks for nice sharing
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